Today's post is sort of related to the previous one in that it deals with things not happening in a book that really should be happening.
Lack of "action".
Now, I'm not talking about things not happening in the book--in fact sometimes books with too much action fall into this trouble group. I'm talking about ones with no real inciting incident. Hmmmm...even that doesn't really cover it.
The "lack of a start of action" books. Now, I see you all shaking your heads, wondering what the heck I'm talking about and if a few too many brain cells have gone MIA on me lately. But stick with me.
I've recently read/been reading two books by the same author in a series I like. On both I found myself almost a hundred pages in and never had that feeling of "cue the start of all hell breaking loose" here.
The book just rolled into a disaster, then another, then another. Even though I do like this author, and she does this all the time, it's annoying. And when I find something annoying as a reader, I pretty much figure out it's something to look out for as a writer ;).
1) I like having a bit of a set up. Even in books that start in full action and/or ones that are an ongoing series where most readers already know the characters and the world.(step back after the bomb goes off and get the reader nestled nicely into the world before the next disaster). I like to get into the world before the characters go out trying to save it ;).
2) A subtle demarcation of "oh shit- this is going to be bad" at the start of the disaster arc. I don't need to be bashed over the head with it, but I (as the reader) want to see the line in the sand, the no going back, the we are sooooo screwed moment. In the case of this author (and she is not alone by any means) there just seemed to be a running from one problem to the next, no "start" and no increasing of the problems. If you were to draw the plot arc these books would be dead--as in a flat line.
I usually come across these books in either Urban Fantasy and or Fantasy series. Now not all authors with series books do this, but it does seem that when I find it it is either a fantasy or urban fantasy series.
So folks- watch it. Don't just throw a bunch of events at your reader, start slowly (remember your introductory paragraph when you learned to write an essay? ;)), build to the start of the action, and keep that action ramping UP. Your readers will thank you.
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